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BDSM Interracial Threesome Story
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BDSM Interracial Threesome Story
A little story from earlier this year in nyc...

Read it here.
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10-24-2015, 03:41 AM
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good promo Mark
but it is bullshit - this is how I see it

edit...are you a fiction writer ?
based on my experiences, I would fail you ...but who knows ..I am out of touch maybe now days ?

creative mind ? prove me wrong man....wish all best !


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10-24-2015, 12:36 PM
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That was an abrupt ending.
10-24-2015, 02:21 PM
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@Max: It isn't bullshit at all.
Dom and others have met these girls.
Are you questioning my integrity? Why is this story hard to believe for you...
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10-26-2015, 12:18 PM
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Should post picture of you walking around NYC with Anna on leash.
10-26-2015, 12:59 PM
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Max thought I was lying about banging some polish mature chick on the beach while her husband wanked over it in Bulgaria.

Same abrupt snarky type comment as well. Dudes a bitch.

10-26-2015, 05:45 PM
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I am not saying it did not happen Mark.
I am challenging your writing style or in another words artistic expression.

For example - "I couldn’t take it anymore, and with super human strength I broke free and released my inner caveman."

This is when the "bullshit alarm" went off - the story in my view is "dress up" too much. Many guys tend to do that. The title "BDSM Interracial Threesome Story" - is not exactly creative neither but just sounds as category from a porn site. Anyway I may be tough at times with my comments but I would hold you to higher standard. So take this as constructive criticism. This does not mean I am right, just my angle of observations.




(10-26-2015, 12:18 PM)Zolo Wrote: @Max: It isn't bullshit at all.
Dom and others have met these girls.
Are you questioning my integrity? Why is this story hard to believe for you...


Ricky I do not recall calling you a liar. I may poke fun sometimes, but not in negative sense. So Mr Sensitive gets your facts straight before you label me.

(10-26-2015, 05:45 PM)Rick91 Wrote: Max thought I was lying about banging some polish mature chick on the beach while her husband wanked over it in Bulgaria.

Same abrupt snarky type comment as well. Dudes a bitch.

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Well while your "bullshit alarm" went off, so did my "who the fuck is this cunt" alarm went off, so watch your tone.

@Atown: Boom...

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10-28-2015, 03:18 PM
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(10-28-2015, 03:18 PM)Zolo Wrote: Well while your "bullshit alarm" went off, so did my "who the fuck is this cunt" alarm went off, so watch your tone.


You posted this clearly wanting opinions. Max gave you his without being rude and tried to clarify what he meant, why would you feel the need to speak down to one of the forums best posters like that? He was being constructive in his criticism, and the "I couldn’t take it anymore, and with super human strength I broke free and released my inner caveman." may have been exactly what happened, but still comes across sounding slightly cartoonish and exaggerated.

Cool pic though. I'd love to see reaction shots of passers-by if you take her out in the street in like that.
10-28-2015, 08:53 PM
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I am not here Mark to put you down or bust your balls man, in fact I wish you well. I have commented in the past number of times in positive way in response to your postings.

By what I can tell so far you doing very well, number of things are going for you, you are have good support network, family and good health.

I am a little older then you, so maybe sometimes I see things differently and yes sometimes my criticism can be perceived as harsh, but I am doing this with good intentions. It is hard sometimes to listen to someone who may critic your work or give you other advice that does not flow with "main current".

I am sure you did a lot of work to complete your book and yes not everyone would be able to do this. However I did not like in particular your promo story the way was written. I think you could do better job writing about by spending more time on this ....that is all.

(It seems you had great experience living through your threesome event, so give justice by writing good story )

LOL - By now I had been called a bitch and a cunt.....


I may perhaps give second thought all together ...









(10-28-2015, 03:18 PM)Zolo Wrote: Well while your "bullshit alarm" went off, so did my "who the fuck is this cunt" alarm went off, so watch your tone.

@Atown: Boom...

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Cunt is a often a term of endearment where I'm from. Don't take offense.
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Zolo how much are you spending a month in NYC and how much did the visa cost you?
11-09-2015, 03:00 AM
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I'm on a graduate visa... can't remember how much it cost... maybe 2k or so.
I'm spending about 2k a month including rent.
11-09-2015, 03:18 PM
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Going to start traveling again anytime soon? If so, where? Should go to South America or Russia.
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Nah man, Central Africa or silk road.
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